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Andy Powell

The Metaphor of a Clean Shave

I’m in dad’s bathroom, downstairs,

of course, messier

than any other part of the house

in that gendered babyboomer sort of way,

slathering my thickish, reddish beard

with soft, fun froth,

using his badger hair shaving brush –

his only vestige aside from the tin of shoe polish

from the old days, these days

you’ll mostly find new bike shorts

and electrolyte tablets on his receipts –

and I turn out the itch from my face

like a bad child from the dinner table

and lift the tough chin patches

like the dark spots on a peach with a knife,

which is a Gillette Mach 3 in this allegory.

The objects in the room are charged:

a standard amber pill bottle faces the mirror

but I know it is Lipitor and I see the number of refills

is infinite and the future is a hungry bear

I will be consumed by, in known ways,

and the ceramic cup with the shaving soap in it

is, dearly, the same old one with a nautical blue circle

with a nautical blue scene painted inside the circle,

most nautical things in Mystic mixing beauty

and privilege in an awkward often awful chowder,

the hair brush that has been smushed

from hundreds of morning runs

through dad’s persistent hair, which I didn’t get

to be a part of, have never used a brush.

A Dickman brother, Michael, I believe

already wrote a poem about shaving with his mother’s

razor, which is a more interesting conceit,

but here we are, downstairs,

and, originally, in a story I couldn’t write,

I had imagined a party

upstairs while I hid and shaved

and hoped that clearing a forest

would tie up all the loose ends,

there are so many feelings about family –

it was a family party for nana’s birthday,

which was wishful thinking in the first place,

nana hasn’t gone more than 1,000 feet

from her room in a long time, though she has

a whole world wherever; you can’t get through

the nursing home without meeting her physical therapist

who she says you’re going to love

and who she says is going to love you

so when I meet her

I blush like the dickens.

And how can any of us not get a little sad

and punchy

when we realize Uncle Joey isn’t at the party,

hasn’t been here so many times he would have

helped diffuse a little family tension

with his jokes and beard and gentleness,

I’d never seen mom cry

before he died;

the party is already engulfing me,

so, back to the mirror for us.

When I look closely enough, the clean shave

isn’t terribly clean;

I can see a meadow growing where the forest

of my beard was cleared,

and the signs at the arboretum said meadows

are unstable communities,

but I try not to focus on that aspect,

rather on the fact that meadows are characterized

by grasses and grass-like species

often growing in the company of showy flowering species,

and I decide that sometimes we are the one

we want to be, and that at this family gathering

I want to be a grass-like species,

not quite grass, not sticking

around the party like I should, as host’s son,

but not sneaking off for too long, not

a flower, no, not right now, I will save my showy flowerness

for when I walk down the hill in the good dark,

past the lovely quiet brick library, alone

if we are set mid-’09 or before, wondering

if the library cat went home at night

with the librarian or stalked the bookcases

and slept on Proust, or Clifton, or Fanon,

or, if we are set later, the same wonderings with J,

and sometimes my little brother will join us

in the flowering

after everyone has left.

It’s good for the both of us the story

isn’t set at another member of my family’s house

because who wants to think about a drive

back on the suburban dark highway

full of stress-eaten pie, a little

bit of each, dear,

and cake and ice cream, a scoop

of chocolate and a scoop of blackberry, no

I don’t have the will to cut myself off

when all the damning legacy in the air

makes it hard even to walk out

the front door without making an excuse –

the stars are out, I need some fresh air,

there are other people’s cats I’d like to ponder.



Andy Powell is a Teaching Artist for DreamYard, has poems out or forthcoming with Winter Tangerine, Half Mystic, Queen Mob's Teahouse, elsewhere, and is a poetry reader for The Adroit Journal.


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